"I don't get what you see in this. Your species is badly designed," Elise growled as she groped her new human breasts with visible disgust. "Who was the idiot who decided to put these up here? Boobs should be lower! How are foals supposed to reach them? It's absurd!"
Elise wouldn't stop grumbling about her human upper body, as if every second in it was an insult. And worst of all: she had absolutely no idea how that anatomy even worked.
"Hehe... it's because humans have to carry their babies so they can nurse," I tried to explain, though I already knew she wasn't going to accept any logic that wasn't her own.
"Hmm... even their offspring are useless. They can't even suckle on their own," she said with pure disdain. "Honestly, your species is a joke. Weak, flawed... and with boobs in the wrong place! What kind of design is that?"
She looked at her own breasts like they were some sort of evolutionary abomination, but I knew the only reason she was paying them so much attention... was because I had too. Quite a lot.
"If I changed into this, you could change too. You should abandon that failed human form and join the superior side," she said with disturbing ease, like she was preaching. "Humans are doomed to extinction with all their imperfections. Come with me. Evolve. Join the superior race."
"Oh, Elise..." I chuckled, barely holding back a laugh. "Please, don't become the Hitler of horses."
"What's a 'Hitler'?" she asked, confused.
"Nothing, nothing... forget it. But stop complaining. You're not that bad. You're gorgeous—even if you don't like your new 'flaws'." I gently stroked her face, and she shivered, still not used to the sensitivity of her new skin.
"That's what you say," she snorted.
Elise crossed her arms awkwardly and turned her head away, pouting with her new lips so perfectly that it shocked me. How could she manage that when she couldn't even coordinate the rest of her human body?
I sighed in resignation. Another one of those episodes.
"Love… what's wrong now?" I asked softly, trying to calm her.
"Nothing. Everything's perfect, isn't it?" she replied sarcastically as she sat up. "Nothing to worry about… after all, now I'm pretty enough, right?"
"Again with that? I told you: you're the most beautiful mare of all." I tried to use my sweetest tone, the one I usually used to ease her anger.
"Yeah, now I am," she said, tilting her head with a cynical smile. "Look at me: fragile hairless skin, a nose ridiculously close to the eyes, and these dangling balls way too high for any practical use. Seriously, who puts the tits so far from the pussy!?"
"Elise… your new appearance doesn't change anything. You've always been beautiful," I tried to reason with her.
"As if I could believe you," she muttered, looking away. "You've been all over these since the start," she bounced her chest dramatically. "Don't deny it. I only seem attractive to you now, right? That hurts..."
"Hey, I groped your tits when you were a unicorn too…" I defended myself weakly.
"You've touched me more in the last hour than in all our years together!" she shouted, eyes wet.
And… I was speechless. Because maybe she had a point. Maybe I had gotten too excited about her new form. Maybe I had gone a bit overboard.
"You only care about humans, don't you? I bet you used to think I was hideous and just put up with me, but now—only now—you really appreciate me," she said, her voice dripping with venom.
"Wait… this isn't about Morgana, is it? Don't tell me you believed something she said. You know she's not to be trusted," I said, worried about what shadow that witch might have left in her mind.
"Why would you care?" she hissed. "But no, your precious lover has nothing to do with this," she mocked bitterly. "Why don't you go make a few more foals with her? I'm sure her children would be beautiful. She fits your definition of 'beauty' perfectly, doesn't she?"
"Elise, calm down… it's not like that. I've always thought you were beautiful," I tried to get closer, but she didn't let me.
She struck the ground hard with her front hooves, warning me not to take another step. Luckily, her powers weren't going haywire this time. If they were… I'd probably be airborne by now.
"Then why do you have so many girlfriends…?" she asked with unsettling calm, staring straight at me.
"We already talked abou—" I started, but she cut me off bluntly.
"...Human ones?" she finished the sentence like a dagger.
"What?" I was stunned.
"You say I'm beautiful, that I have nothing to envy in them, yet I'm the only one like me among your women." Her gaze judged me without mercy. "They're all human. Every single one. And I'm the only unicorn. Or pegasus. Or 'horse,' like you called me once. If I were really as beautiful as you say… there'd be more like me. Because you wouldn't be able to resist."
Her reasoning hit me like a brick. I didn't see it coming. I always thought the issue was that I had other women… but now it seemed the real problem was that there weren't other women… like her.
Luckily, I still had one card left that might get me out of this.
"Elise, love," I stepped closer, intending to caress her, "I don't think there's anyone else like you. Even if I tried, I wouldn't find her. What would be the point in looking for someone like you, when I can't even imagine someone coming close? You're… impossible to match."
She didn't change her expression. In fact, she looked at me with even more disdain, exhaling with frustration.
"As you once said about me: I'm naive, not stupid. If I believed for one second what you just said, I'd rather stay the dumb unicorn wandering the woods." Her eyes were filled with emotion. "If you want a woman, you get one; doesn't matter if she's better or worse than the last, you just take her."
Her words disarmed me. Elise had changed. Grown. Learned to understand this world and her emotions. And while that should've made me happy… at this moment, it was a real pain in the balls.
"Elise…" I started to speak, less confidently this time, but she interrupted me again.
"I'm sure when my divine world grows, you'll want to fill it with humans, right? To have more females to fuck. That's what I'm for, right? To give you more human pussies to collect." She said it with a painful mix of contempt and sadness.
"Elise… stop. Yes, maybe you're right about many things… but you know well that you're not that." I approached her slowly, despite the unspoken threat that she might kick my face in. "I love you. And… honestly, I'm tired of having these arguments over and over."
I sighed as I used the transfigured bench to rise up and hold her face in my hands. Her skin still wasn't used to that kind of contact.
"Then you should be a better stud," she murmured weakly, avoiding my gaze. Her reddened eyes were on the verge of tears.
"I know. I'm awful…" I said with a sad smile, trying to soften her anger.
"Tell me the truth," she glanced at me sideways. "Do you like human bodies more… than equine ones?"
"I…" I paused. I could have lied. But I didn't. "For sex, yes. But that doesn't mean I think your equine form is less attractive… sometimes, it's even more."
"Hmmm… that doesn't make me feel better," she said, curling her lip while a few tears slipped out, though it was clear she was trying to hold them back to appear strong.
"It's okay, Elise…" I whispered gently. "I know I was wrong. And from now on… I'll try. I'll do whatever it takes to see your true form, to learn to desire it… until I like it. Until I go crazy for you, in all your forms."
"That's not enough…" she murmured, in that bitter tone that only comes with pain.
"Then… how can I fix it?" I asked sincerely.
Before, I was the one who decided how to resolve every situation. But now… Elise had grown. Intellectually and emotionally. And I felt she deserved to have the final word.
Elise paused, thoughtful. She looked a bit dizzy from the sudden shift in roles. Before, she was a wild creature, free of complex concerns. She didn't need plans or negotiations. Just run, graze, and kick things she didn't like. But she wasn't that forest beast anymore.
Even so, it didn't take long for her to come up with a few ideas.
"You have to do what you said," she told me firmly, frowning, without hesitation. "Look at me the way you look at human women. Make yourself like it. Really."
I nodded without saying anything. It was clear this wouldn't be easy.
"And the new world…" she added, pensive.
"What about it?" I asked cautiously.
"I don't want it to have humans," she finally said, almost like a command. "If anything is going to inhabit that world, let it be equines. Or creatures like them. No human females."
The idea seemed to take shape in her mind as she spoke, like she was creating it just by voicing it.
"Alright. It's your world, we can make it however you want," I replied with a soft smile while caressing her cheek. "Besides… if we fill it with unicorns, maybe you could reach that 'Divinity of Unicorns' we talked about. Remember?"
"Yes," she replied with a small sigh of relief. But she didn't stop there. "And… I also want you to get more women like me."
The sentence hung in the air.
"More… unicorns?" I asked, my soul trembling.
"Equines is fine," she said, as if the idea had just occurred to her. "Or at least… not humans. If you can't have more like me, then at least not all of them should be two-legged."
"Elise… that's already something… more complicated," I admitted, feeling like this was going off the rails.
"At least try," she pleaded, with a look mixing sadness and longing. Her big, shiny, teary eyes were like an emotional trap I couldn't escape from.
I sighed.
"…Okay… I'll try," I said, resigned, surrendering completely to her emotional power. I tried to sound annoyed. "Is that all?"
"No," she replied firmly while stepping away and turning her back to me. Her tail swished nervously. "There's one last thing."
She turned just enough to look at me out of the corner of her eye, one glowing pupil fixed on me with a demanding expression. Her body language was clear: what was coming next was non-negotiable.
"I want you to make love to me. Right now."
The way she said it was an ultimatum disguised as desire. She was still upset. And her rigid, tense posture suggested that if I didn't give her what she asked for, I would pay. And I definitely didn't want to experience what Morgana did when it came to… horse kicks.
"And none of the human part. No, no," Elise said with total certainty, as if stating a scientific fact. "You have to use the only part of my current body that's still decent."
She had that wild prideful look, convinced her equine half was perfect and glorious.
"I have to help you overcome that disgusting human fetish of yours and teach you the obvious: that true beauty, true sexuality, was always in horse pussies." She said it without blinking. I did. Many times. "And in a nice pair of tits right near it, so you can play with them the right way." She added in a didactic tone, like she was teaching me a universal truth. "Now let go of your stupid beliefs… and discover the absolute truth by worshipping me."
I looked at her in silence. A little scared. A little confused. A little… aroused, which was even more concerning.
Elise's words were starting to seriously worry me. Not so much because of the content (though… yeah), but because of what they implied: thanks to me, a god was being born. A very weird one. One with very specific ideas about 'religion', interspecies sex.
There was no escape now. I just had to play along… for now.
Though, as soon as I could, I'd talk to her about what makes a religion good, what a decent god is, and why not everyone should be out there worshipping horse pussies like they're sacred temples.
But that, clearly, would be a conversation for another time.
...
By the time we got back to Morgana's place, Elise had already returned to her previous form. She also looked much more confident… while I had my hips and tongue completely worn out.
Things got a little worse when we ran into Morgana. Without warning, Elise kissed me violently, invading my mouth with her tongue while staring straight at the witch with that look of triumphant arrogance. As if to say, "Look at me, inferior human." Or at least, that's what I think. Honestly, I'm not sure anyone else understood her gesture… except her.
Anyway, I survived her outburst, and things between us were more or less okay now. Of course, I took advantage of the calm to set some boundaries and make it clear that things like this shouldn't happen again in the future.
Though… I'm not so sure she listened.
This, I fear, is the price of having a girlfriend who's a magical creature, with superpowers, and who has now discovered the joy of emotional, sexual, and apparently also diplomatic domination.
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