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A commoner

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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1:A simple commoner

This story starts in a world where there are different classes commoner and nobel.The commoners are poor and have low mana while the novels are wealthy and have high mana.This story starts whith a small boy who is a commoner ,and he was running through the poor village past the school for novels.Some villagers told the small boy who's name is Leo that over these tall walls the magic teacher is teaching magic to children who are the same age as him.Leo was so intrigued so he decided to try and climb the wall and peak,when he got to the top he saw children who are novels using magic and a wise wizard in the center of them showing them the basic version of manna control.Leo was so shocked when he saw magic for his first time and now he has faith that he can do it cause he saw children the same age as him doing it so he tried copying what the wizard has done.The wizard noticed him a long time ago but decided to let him join for a little bit.Leo bursted out in joy and jumped down.The wizard explained the basics of mana control and that they will problem tap into it at the age of 13 and control it at the age of 18 to 20,as soon as he says that Leo briefly access manna and the wizard notices this before the boy collapses. The wizard says in his mind if only this boy was a nobel I could train him to be the finest mages cause the boy is truly a genius sadly he wouldn't be able to thrive without a teacher after all he is a commoner. The wizard sighs and takes the boy out of the school.But to Leo that does not matter cause to him just having a glimpse of magic was a feeling he could not explain it was like he could hear ,smell and see everything around him 100 times better and his goes was to become the most powerful mage .So when he went home he was set on training even though Leo was only 8.As soon as Leo walked in his old wooden cabin ,his mother instantly scolded him for wondering of and she said she was worried sik.The next days for 30 days he tried to tap into the basic mana control like he did before but he couldn't do it again . Then his father finally came back from his 1 month trip from the coal mine.Leo jumped up and went to go hug and tell his father everything,and his father just chuckled and said you have a big imagination son.4 years past and Leo master the basic level of mana which no one should be able to do at his age which is 12 years old .One day he decided to walk through the village and a girl of similar age as Leo but she wore fancier close and she was a nobel and her name was Yuna.Yuna started to mok Leo for whereing rags and being a commoner the she shot a weak manna attack to him with he easily deflected and then Leo activated his basic mana control and was about to nock her out until her father the duke comes out of nowhere and stops Leo's attack but the duke was surprised to see that this boy could already could use basic mana and that the boy was only a commoner.Meanwhile Yuna is blushing on the side that she lost and she thinks Leo look kinda hot whith his blue eyes and white hair.