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Spider Legacy – Chapter 3: Shadows Over I-Island
Scene: Villain Hideout
Boss Man (grinning):
"Alright, you lowlife thugs—listen up. I got intel from a very special source.
David Shield and his daughter are gonna be off I-Island for a vacation… right here in Japan.
That's our shot.
We'll pose as their security escort—then take 'em to a 'warehouse for processing'.
Once we've got 'em? Ransom 'em off."
Scene Change: Aldera Middle School
The halls buzz with activity. Then—
Bakugo (smirking):
"Face it, Deku—you'll never be a hero. You're quirkless. Useless. Just like your brother."
He glances around, arms crossed.
"Speaking of that extra—where is he?"
Izuku's wide, green eyes glance down. He hesitates.
Izuku (quietly):
"I… I don't know, Kacchan. He said he had something to take care of—"
Bakugo raises his fist, about to strike—
—but suddenly a hand grips his wrist firmly.
Andrew (stepping in):
"That's enough. Leave him alone."
Bakugo (mocking):
"Well, look who it is. The little nerd thinks he can act tough."
He lets off a small explosion, sending Andrew sliding back a few feet.
Bakugo:
"Face it, Andrew—you're just jealous I've actually got a Quirk. I've got real hero potential. You've got… what, nothing?"
Andrew frowns but stays calm. He steps forward.
Andrew (firm):
"I don't know where you got the idea that what you're doing is right—picking on people who can't fight back.
Here's a lesson for you.
I know what I am. And I know what I'm not. I'm not like my brother—I'm not trying to be a 'hero' for fame.
But when someone needs help, I'll be there. That's what matters.
You? You've got all this power—but none of the responsibility that comes with it.
If you can't even act mature with your Quirk… then maybe you're not as special as you think."
Andrew turns and walks away, leaving Bakugo silent—and seething.
Izuku hurries to catch up with him.
Walking Home
Izuku (nervous):
"Ah, man… did you really have to say that to Kacchan? He's our friend."
Andrew:
"Not mine. Not anymore. If you still want to believe what he's doing is some twisted version of 'friendship,' that's on you.
Maybe you see good in him. Maybe.
But I don't want to deal with that."
Izuku (shrugs):
"Guess we'll just have to agree to disagree.
Anyway, I'm heading straight home. What about you?"
Andrew (grinning):
"Eh, I might swing by and see if I can get some pictures of Spider-Man. The newspaper said they'd pay for a few good shots every month."
Before Izuku can reply, something catches Andrew's eye. A large electronic billboard flickers to a breaking news alert.
Billboard – Live News
Newscaster:
"Breaking news: The mr shield daughter has been kidnapped.
Roughly 40 minutes ago, we received a video from the captors, detailing their demands.
All Might has yet to respond publicly, but Detective Tsunetoshi Tunskinori is currently leading negotiations.
The kidnappers are demanding 80 million yen and a clean escape.
Stay tuned for more—"
The screen fades to black.
Izuku (worried):
"Man… I hope All Might gets to them in time."
Andrew (casual):
"Yeah… I hope so too.
Anyway, I told someone I'd meet them at the arcade. Just an online friend. I'll be back by 9, don't worry—tell Mom."
Izuku:
"Alright. Be safe, Andrew."
Izuku continues down the path. Meanwhile, Andrew darts into an alleyway, pulling off his school uniform—revealing the spider-emblem beneath.
Moments later, Spider-Man leaps into the sky.
End of Chapter